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JFK Assassination according to Donald Trump

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Another extraordinary EC with the imaginative Domenico :iconkeneru92:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I love the concept here and think the core idea is really great <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
You sure have a talent for drawing and this is very evident.

I love the fact that your telling a non linear story with no dialogue on one page <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

A few things that could of just pushed this would be to consider the line weights.
I can see what you are trying to do, but there seems to be a flatness to the whole piece.

If you were to add a thicker line wight to the gun and the JFK in the bottom left hand corner it would make the gun pop a little more.

This could also be improved by changing the main pic of Jackie and the motorcade classic image.

As I said it looks really good and I can see the idea your going for, I would personally just add some extra line weights. After considering which element of the piece you want the viewer to see first.

You as an artist can guide the viewer around the page in a very subtle way by doing this.

Great idea, excellent draught skills, would love to see it pushed a little more <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>